It was Friday night and the Wilibe family was at home. They had 3 children, Jo, Josh and James, 1 cat, 2 dogs, 3 birds, 5 chickens and 1 lizard.
They had put nothing out for dinner, so the parents said “Um, we can have… ok guys, we are going to have toast for dinner. Do you want honey on your toast?”
“Yes” said Jo.
“Sure” said Josh.
“No” James said, “I like Marmite. Can I please have that?”
“Sure” said the parents.
The dogs got their food, so did the cat, the birds, the chickens and the lizard. And of course the kids got their food.
Hi Polly,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I loved the simplicity of your story.
It sounds like everybody was happy!
Good work this week.
Keep writing.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
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Hi Polly, apologies that this seems to be a delayed response to your week 26 prompt. I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this piece, you had a good flow with the dialogue and narrative, and I also liked the descriptive details you included. Well done and keep up the good work!
Anna (Team 100WC)