It was at a weight competition, there was a big man and a little lady, and the man John said “I’m gunna beat you old lady”, the old lady Linda said “I’m 32 and we will see who will beat who Mr man”. It was time start the competition, Linda walk to the weights, and John run to the weights and he said “lets beat this old lady”, and Linda said “I’M 32 YEARS OLD BUT LETS GO” John went first and he said “ but it was heavier then i expected” he couldn’t do it. Then it was Linda’s turn and she did it she won the competition and she went to John and said well done.
To Polly
I liked the way you used adjectives
Next time say were the scene is set
I liked your story
I enjoyed reading your story as I expected John would win, good twist at the end. Thank you.
Hi Polly,
Well done on your story this week. I liked how you used the prompt in your writing. It made me laugh that the ‘old lady’ was 32, as I think that’s quite young!!
I was glad she won the contest too.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland
Amazing job Polly i really likes your story.
Good job