It was Wednesday the 16th of May, and there were about 30 houses in this street. At the 29th house, people wondered, did someone live there or was it just a house? No one knew.
Two boys lived in the same neighbourhood and they wanted to find out if someone lived there. They both decided to knock on the door.
The house had a long driveway and it wasn’t very clean, but the boys said, “lets go and knock on the door”.
So they did, they knocked on the door and… the door opened. A really nice lady came out and said “hey boys ,how are you?”
“We’re good,” said the boys. ” We just wanted to invite you to dinner”.
The lady said that she would love to come.
What a lovely story, Polly. I was sure it was going to be much more sinister than it was. I like the way you build the tension. You have included some good description; the long driveway and the fact that the hose was not very clean. All in all, a very nice story,